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Commission: A Break In Training

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Latest commission finished! This one was a team commission but a bit different than my usual team pictures :) I don't usually get to draw these Pokemon so it was really cool to get that chance.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hi ^^ I really like this piece, I love pokemon so I've decided to critique this work.
I think that the arbok and growyle are...perfect. I really like the other pokemon too but I see something strange in the ninetales. The trainer seems to have a good anatomy but the coloration makes the arm seems innatural.
The whole coloration is really good, I really like how you did the sky and clouds, the lights and shadows are perfect. The main problem is the fact that the growyle seems to rest on nothing , it's too far by the trees but the bush has not any irregularity.
I really like this traditional piece and I hope that my critique could help you ^^